Monday, 21 October 2024

Debz Hobbs-Wyatt talks to me about her latest publication, If Crows Could Talk

 


So, I’ve already seen one incarnation of this story and I believe it’s been around even longer than that. Can you tell us something about how it came to be?

If Crows Could Talk started life as a short story called Colourblind in 2004. It was part of my first attempt at an adult novel. It was centred around a tribe of Crow Indians on the eve of Columbus's discovery and it had short stories woven into it, all warnings about a future USA. The crow theme permeated all these stories in one way or another, and in a novel about American history, it would have been so wrong not to have included one about Jim Crow and the history of the American Civil Rights movement. I later felt it was too big of a story to be so short so I developed it into my second novel. The first one I now see as more of a practice novel. I did submit it to agents, but I was far from ready! I had no idea if the Colourblind novel was any good which is why I sought a critique and how I found you, the lovely Gill. I have to say how helpful that was and encouraging and I have an awful lot to thank you for in my writing career. Though I knew the rewrite based on that critique made it so much better and the rejections from agents was a lot more encouraging than my first novel, I also knew I still had so much to learn. It was a big story set in a different country, written about a different culture and I needed to be a better writer to really do that justice. That is why I decided to rest it and develop as a writer before I attempted to rework it. But somehow I always knew I would. There was something about that story, I knew it had to be told one day.

I rewrote it in 2020 while recovering from breast cancer surgery, and it just poured from me. It took seven months and I knew it was finally ready when I sent it to my agent. I was so so happy when I learned of Walela, a new literary imprint, and my agent submitted it for consideration. And so thrilled when Walela took it as their inaugural acquisition! Gill, you were the only person apart from a few agents back then who had seen the original version and knew how much it had been developed since then.
 
What was it like rewriting it? Without giving any spoilers can you tell us what some of the major changes were? I note Alice has become April.

It was so wonderful to revisit this story after so long. I didn't edit the previous version -- I wrote from scratch. I kept the premise the same, what I changed I know enhanced it. I did change Alice's name because we meet her older in this version and when people read it they will see why I needed her older. I could have kept her name but Alice sounded younger somehow and more old-fashioned and that is really the only reason I changed it. By making her older it meant she had a voice in this which I really felt she needed.

I changed some important elements of her story, including her dilemma that we learn in the prologue and also in her family. This was important as I was never happy with the voices I used to tell her story in the original version. George's story also changed a fair bit. This is really a story about family and his life and spans over fifty years. I didn't do it this way in the first version. I did have the same two-tiered chapters where we had the two story-lines, but this time I started on both April's and George's fifteenth birthdays, fifty years apart, same town, and then followed April's story over a year (2003) and George's over fifty years (1953 to 2003) until the timelines converge in a dramatic climax. The most important change I have to hold back on telling you because I don't want to give anything away but I knew when I realised it, it was the only way to go. All I will say is it's to do with how April's story connects to George's.
 
Can you tell us some more about some of the characters? Without spoilers, of course?

I love George. He is complex, shy, a poet and he has his demons. But he is a family man, with Molly at his side and though he is troubled, I feel such a deep connection to him and what happened to him. 

It's strange how everyone loved Lydia in my first novel, also African-American. People even asked me if I was going to write anything else with her in. I thought about that. I thought about that a lot. You see there was a mysterious character I had used in the first version of this story who appeared at pertinent moments and played a vital role in the story, especially at the climax. I wanted to use him and I have a feeling he will appear in a book somewhere, but I realised Lydia could fulfil that role here. She is a psychic after all. Not only that, without every realising it until I looked closer, I had said that Lydia had a cousin who lived in Atlanta! And that it seems was Molly, George's wife. So the connection had already been made subconsciously which for me is one of the spooky things that often happens when you write. Trust me, there were a lot of spooky things that happened when I wrote this one.

April is a troubled very intelligent teenager and I feel for her plight. It's actually her teacher Ruby-May who recognises something about her and is the one who helps, because she has known something like this before. I felt very connected to her and her husband Randolph.
 
What do you say when people ask you what the book is about?

I say it's a literary American mystery about an African-American man living in the shadow on Jim Crow and a teenage white girl born fifty years later in the same town. That they need to find one another to put George's demons to rest. But it's actually so much more than that. It is a story about love, grief, family and the power of secrets. And what beats at its heart is a mission for justice. Had April not been there, George would have carried his deepest secret to the grave.
 
It’s the first book to be published by the new imprint Walela?  What is Walela all about and why  is If Crows Could Talk such a good fit?

I have been the queen of spectacular rejections with the big presses. I have an amazing agent and since the first novel While No One Was Watching, I have written another nine novels. I get such near misses with wonderful compliments and it seems the main reason none have been picked up (yet!) isn't to do with the quality of the work, but more to do with what the big publishers plan to print in the next two to three years. It's so subjective at that stage. What happens is some great well-crafted novels fall through the net and we all know a lot of fast-tracked authors (some already celebrities) whose books do make it, that perhaps might not if they didn't have a name. I get it; it's when art turns to business. The big presses decide what you see on the shelves in the bookstores and what is front of house on the tables in these stores and what you see advertised everywhere so you buy them. But this leaves a huge gap of wonderfully written novels that are nowhere. So  when you told me you thought Bridge House needed a literary (not commercial) imprint for books of that quality, the seed was planted. Indie presses are wonderful and more likely to take a chance on writers like me. You also told me you sought high quality fiction, either from writers Bridge House already knew and knew their work was at that standard or writers submitting through agents. I asked if you would consider what you'd always known as Colourblind and you said yes. But though connected to Bridge House, as a freelance editor, I still had to submit it via Camilla and it wasn't guaranteed. So I was thrilled you thought it a good fit as I do know you had very specific ideas on what you wanted and it needed to be a book with sufficient literary merit to set the standard and tone. And phew, it seems it did! I hope!
 
I know you had a rather spectacular launch. I was there. Can you tell us about some of the highlights? 
 
 

 

I loved it! The launch took place on October 4th at St Nicholas Church on Canvey Island, where I launched my first novel (that one also had a launch in Wales) and where I got married in 2019! We had over sixty people come along. My agent gave an introduction and was very complimentary and we showed the book trailer for the first time. You then interviewed me about the book and the characters much as you have here and I gave short readings for some of the key characters. We then had a short Q&A and then refreshments in the foyer area while I signed books. The comments were all very complimentary and everyone said they had a great evening. We sold a lot of books!  I love book launches and I think we so need to celebrate our successes in an industry with so much rejection. I have found the informal 'in conversation with' interview usually works very well.                                         
 
Do you have any more events planned? (List them all, with links if  possible)

Oh yes! Unless you are a fast-tracked author selected by your BIG publisher, you have to do a lot of promotion for people to know your book even exists. Walela is a fabulous indie press, who do publicity but it falls upon the writers' shoulders to do a lot. So I made a plan long before the book was out. It included a social media assistant and a small affordable PR company for reviews (I hope!)... And lots of planning. 

This is what the current diary looks like (I have already had 4 events since the book launch!

Tuesday October 22nd Meet the Author

Waterside Leisure Centre, Canvey Island, reading and signing copies with donation to Breast Cancer

 

Saturday October 26th   Craft Fair         

Rayleigh Mill Rayleigh Essex https://www.folkandbespoke.com/calendar/the-mill-arts-events-centre-artisan-craft-fair-16/

 

 

Thursday October 31st Talk/Writing Workshop for Black History Month   

Canvey Island Library for 13 year olds to adults 

https://library-events.essex.gov.uk/event?id=168328

 

Sunday November 3rd Christmas Fair    

Cliffs Pavilion Craft Fair, Westcliff-on-Sea 

https://www.folkandbespoke.com/calendar/cliffs-pavilion-artisan-craft-fair-4/

 

Saturday November 16th Christmas Fair 

St Nicholas Church, Canvey Island https://www.facebook.com/events/1978264349256033 

 

Monday November 18th

Human Kind Cafe in Billericay which is more of a writing workshop

 

Sunday December 01 Christmas Fair                                                        

The Windmill Hall, Upminster https://www.folkandbespoke.com/calendar/the-new-windmill-hall-upminster-artisan-craft-fair-10/

Saturday December 7th Bridge House Event

London (with other authors!)

 

Saturday December 14th Meet the Author

Knightswick Shopping Centre Canvey Island

 

Sunday December 15th Meet the Author Christmas Market         

Corner Club, Canvey Island https://www.cornerclub.co.uk/news-offers-events/440641-save-the-date-xmas-market-15th-dec/

 
I also have plans afoot in some local bookshops if possible before Christmas but some in the new year.
I also plan to visit cities across the UK one a month to do signing events in as many places as I can: Bath, Bangor, Brighton, Manchester, Liverpool, Nottingham etc! 
And all being well will be in LA in February/March for black history month in the US (which is February, it is October here so the book was launched at the right time!)

 
Are you working on any more interesting writing projects?

I am working in a collaborative writing project with Canvey Writers that we hope to publish next spring, a charity book for Young Minds.
I have a new novel out on submission and I am planning a domestic literary thriller that I will start writing in the new year!

I want to say a massive thanks to you, Gill, for being an instrumental part of my writing career, which all started with this novel back in 2007 when we first met. For giving me my first publishing break with my short story Jigsaw in 2008 and encouraging me to do my MA and work as an editor and at one time a marketing asssistant at Bridge House to learn the ropes. This novel, for me, is the most special one and the fact it was Walela, your press, who finally published it feels so right. What an honour. Thank you doesn't seem enough. And thanks of course to my lovely agent Camilla Shestopal for not giving up on me! Let's hope this is the beginning of something special with my novels. How do you measure success? For me it's knowing these stories that come from the heart live in other people's hearts, especially the characters. Then I will have done my job.

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