The term comes from the computing industry, where alpha
programmers devise new software and other equally qualified and experienced IT people
test it out in controlled conditions. So an experienced writer gets other
experienced writers to read their work.
Why not ask target readers to try it out? What is wrong with
just using a critique group?
Target readers actually are an excellent idea and I would
define them as beta+. Unlike the experienced writers they are not analysing the
skill of the writer but are responding as a reader. Does this text work? The experienced
writer will look for faults and will critique towards making the text more
polished. They will also have some idea of how to flirt with the publishing
industry. A mixture of both types of reader is probably desirable.
Naturally, members of your local critique group will also do
that. The problem may be that they don’t see the whole text and may only be
judging at a line-editing level. They may, for instance, say that your
characters aren’t clear. Well, probably not if the first time they’ve met them
is in Chapter Six and you’ve introduced them effectively in Chapter One. And
even if your critique group has seen the whole text, as you’ve altered it as
you’ve gone along, they can probably no longer be really objective.
So, it’s good to get a group of fresh-eyed “beta readers” to
look over your carefully edited and polished text.
I’m two thirds of the way through my final edit of Potatoes in Spring and I’m trying to
find my five beta readers. I’m asking a colleague who has a special interest in
the topic and I want him to see how ethical my text is. I’m asking another
colleague, another creative writing teacher who frequently works with young
people, to take a look. With the latter there is a slightly ulterior motive:
she is a playwright and we both think the novel may effectively be turned into
a play. A Holocaust survivor who also came over on the Kindertransport has also
volunteered to read it. Then I want to find two other readers. One should be
another young adult, then two experienced writers. That gives me two betas and
three beta+s. Is that the right number? I’ll revisit that later.
Obviously if I’m asking five people to read my work and
comment on it, for nothing more than an acknowledgement in the book and a free
copy when it is published I need to give something back. I did think about
setting something up that worked like a baby-sitting circle. But this could be
complex to organise and it might mean you work with the same people all of the
time which could lead to a “house style” that may or may not be right. An element
of randomness is probably welcome.
So, at some point I must also be a beta reader. Will it work
fairly if we leave it to everyone’s conscience? Or should we pay our beta readers?
Could people afford to pay? Or could it be a I.O.U that would be settled out of
the advance?
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