This month I’d like
to offer a quick checklist for your short story or novel. And if you’re not a
writer but a reader and a book group member this may also help you to find points
- Is the ending satisfying? Hopefully
it’s not too melodramatic. Nor is it a damp squib. And a deus ex machina
has not been applied. No god is swept on to the stage to solve everything,
either literally or figuratively.
- Has the main character changed? Are they different at the end of the
story from the way they are at the beginning?
- Are the other characters also believable and rounded? Neither completely
good nor completely evil?
- Is there a good narrative balance – the right amount of dialogue, action,
description and inner monologue? Does any exposition have to be there? The
balance of these elements will vary from text to text and may depend on
genre. It’s a talking point anyway.
- Is the reader allowed to think for themselves or is the writer telling
them what to think? The writer should show you what happens and leave the
reader to decide if there is any moral.
Happy reading and
I’m continuing the sixth book in the Schellberg Cycle. This is Helga’s story. Helga is a Holocaust
survivor and the story is set partly in World War II and partly in 2001. The
more modern part is set in North Wales and I have to learn about sheep farming!
The story is as ever taking on a life of its own and the plot is even more
intricate than the way I’d seen it. Actually
this time this is happening more than normal. A while ago I decided to make the
part set in World War II a first person narrative so at some point I’ll have to
go back and alter earlier chapters. Half
way through Chapter 23, I decided that the 21st century part should
also be a first person narrative and this time also present tense. I can
already see that it’s making a difference. But there’ll be a lot of extra work
soon. I am now almost at the end of the last chapter.
I’m very pleased to have had my short story Forever Hold Your Peace accepted by Page
& Spine. You can see it here: https://pagespineficshowcase.com/stories1/forever-hold-your-peace-gill-james
. I submitted this almost two years ago. Doesn’t that show you should never
give up? I wrote the story in response to a prompt form one of our prompt books.
That makes it a double success.
The Young Person’s Library
This month I’ve added:
This is a fluent reader text and includes several characters that have disabilities.
Author Lisette Auton also lives with a disability and prefers to describe herself
as disabled. The novel tells a very
human story though includes mermaids and wreckers.
This is another
fluent reader text. There are plenty of ballet shoes, skates and theatre
performances in these stories. This is a
compilation of Noel Streatfeild’s Christmas-themed earlier works that appeared
in various magazines. There’s lots of nostalgia here.
Current reading recommendation
today Meeting Coty by Ruth Estevez
I really enjoyed attending
the launch of this book at the lovely Portico Library in Manchester. Ruth gave us
a fascinating talk which included some of the history of the Coty firm.
Tessa Garcia has
big dreams and takes steps to make them come true.
Tessa faces many
expectations from her Spanish-Irish Catholic family; that she should marry,
that she shouldn’t work, and that she should be dependent on men all of her life.
She already has a work ethos and an enthusiasm for perfumes. This arouses in
her a fascination with the perfume maker François Coty.
Estevez presents us
with a narrative as smooths as silk in this fascinating story of Meeting Coty.
Find your copy here.
Note: these are usually mobi-files to be downloaded to a Kindle. Occasionally there are PDFs.
This month I’m
offering Fibbin’ Archie.
This is at once a YA
light-hearted romance and a writing experiment. If you read the title out loud
you may get a hint of what the experiment’s about.
Love and romance can be tough for a
Archie has quite a reputation as a practised fibber. Normally his
lies are harmless but as time goes by they begin to get him into more and more
trouble. They lose him his girlfriend, and bizarrely, his hearing is affected as
his ears begin to react in a very strange way every time he is less than
truthful. Giving honest opinions isn’t enough. Deep truth is called for. But
finding that isn’t easy. Some truths are very hard to face. Then numbers become
Fibbin’ Archie is, the
story of a disenchanted young man. It is also a humorous story of love and sex,
an examination of social issues affecting young adults and a story of coming of
Find out more. Grab your copy and lots of other
And please, please, please leave a review when you’ve
Note: Normally my
books and the books supplied by the imprints I manage sell for anything from
£0.99 to £10.99. Most on Kindle are
about £2.99 and the average price for paperback is £7.00. Writers have to make
a living. But I’m offering these free samples so that you can try before you
The Schellberg Project
The posts may be helpful for teachers who are familiar with
the Schellberg stories or who are teaching about the Holocaust. They may also be interesting for other readers
of historical fiction.
Sometimes I also write about what might be of interest to
I’ve added three posts this month.
Two of them are about The
Bamboo Bracelet by Merilyn Brason. The post on 7
April is about an online talk I attended about how the book came to be written. The
post on 30
April is an analysis of the book itself.
This work certainly deserves a place in the project because although it is about
a very different part of World War II many of the experiences and issues described
are so similar.
asylum seekers to Rwanda? is a post in which I seek
to see both sides of the argument but still conclude that this would be a bad
Some notes about my newsletters and
They do overlap a little but here is a summary of what they
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Happy reading and