Saturday, 15 February 2025

Checklist for Checking your Short Story

 



  1. Does it have a good story arc? Has the main character changed by the end of the story? Are your characters rounded, believable and consistent?
  2. Look closely at your expression. Are there any paragraphs that are too long? Do you have a mixture of shorter and longer sentences? Do you have a good balance of action, dialogue, description, inner monologue and exposition- with as little as possible of the last one?  Are the tension and pace balanced? Are there clichés you could replace? Is there repetition? Do mean what you say and say what you mean? Are you showing more than telling and where you are telling is this the right place?
  3. Now read it out loud. You’ll spot mistakes you’ve not noticed yet. You’ll also notice anything that might jar the reader. Perhaps your pet dog or cat may be willing to listen.  
  4. Now for a proof read. Maybe change the font and line spacing for this and read it slowly. You’re looking for remaining typos, punctuation, mistakes and inconsistencies in spellings.
  5. One more proof read deliberately looking for those mistakes you always make; my favourite is ‘form’ instead of ‘from’.
  6. Finally check for presentation. No surprising gaps anywhere? Are section breaks where they’re supposed to be? Your word-processing programme hasn’t done anything weird with the formatting?        

Hint: start each check at a different point in the story – this will stop you skimming at the end.  

Monday, 3 February 2025

News January 2025

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New Year well under way

How is it going for you? I’m writing this on 1 February and there are snowdrops appearing. Have the January blues already gone? Have you made New Year’s resolutions about your wring or reading? How is that going?
I’ve signed up on Good Reads to read sixty books this year. Last year I said fifty and managed sixty-eight.  So far I’m just keeping on top of it.
I’ve decided to have a go at book and gift fairs his year. Do you have any experiences of that? How did you get on? Is it worth it?     

Writing news



I’ve now officially started the seventh Schelberg book. The working title is Gabriela. I’ve spent about three hours on it so it is officially underway. It’s mainly about German resistance to the Nazi regime but it does tie in with the other books. I found myself today researching  how to make Sauerkraut.  Don’t ask. Read the book when it’s out and you’ll understand.   
Natascha’s Story, my highly illustrated book for infant school children, is out and doing the rounds. See the book trailer here and you can find the book here.  It was great to work with my daughter Ashleigh on this text. She’s done some lovely illustrations. I’m holding a small gathering at my home on 20 February. I can only have a few people and I’m pulling names out of a biscuit tin for invites.  Let me know if you would like your name in the biscuit tin.
 

I have a short story on Talking about My Generation: A Little Piece of the Earth  https://This is about grief and hope, Covid and isolation. 
I also have review on there of the Whitefield Garrick production It’s a Wonderful Life. Such a well-loved story.


On My Blog

I’ve been busy again this month. I have three interviews on there. Sarah Swatridge tells me about what it was like bringing the novel back to life through the Renascienta imprint.
 


Henry Lewi discusses his short story collection Once We Were Heroes. Sarah Knapp talks me about her involvement with the Good news ….? anthology.
 

There is also an invite to out online launch of S. Nadja Zajdman’s Between Worlds. Can you join us on 19 February?     
            

The Young Person’s Library

I’ve added just one book this month – my own Natascha’s Story. My description of it here is aimed at the teacher, guardian or school librarian.   


Recommended read

I’ve read some great book this month and was quite torn between two:  Abi Daré’s And So I Roar and Nikki May’s This Motherless Land. Read more. 


Giveaway
 

This month I’m giving away my gentle paranormal romance for young adults: Spooking  
Tom crashes his car and he wakes up in an unfamiliar place. He is unable to reach Amanda. They argued just before the crash. He meets cheeky but friendly Marcus, who, though younger than Tom, has more experience in the areas that now matter. But Marcus has his own concerns and eventually has to leave Tom to deal with his problems on his own. How can Tom let Amanda know how much he loves her? Does she feel the same way? Will they ever be able to move forward?
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The Schellberg Project

The posts may be helpful for teachers who are familiar with the Schellberg stories or who are teaching about the Holocaust.  They may also be interesting for other readers of historical fiction.

This month I have look at the Speakeasy as a place where some of the resistance might take place.  I also write about starting Schellberg seven.      

Some notes about my newsletters and blogs

They do overlap a little but here is a summary of what they all do.
 
Bridge House Authors For all those published by Bridge House, CaféLit, Chapeltown or The Red Telephone or interested in being published by us. General news about the imprints. News for writers. Links to book performance. Sign up here.
 
The Bridgetown  Café Bookshop where you can buy my books and books published by Bridge House Publishing, CafeLit, Chapeltown Books and The Red Telephone.  Visit us here.     
 
Gill’s News: News about my writing, The Schellberg Project, School Visits and Events. Book recommendations and giveaways. Find it here.   
 
Pushing Boundaries, Flying Higher News about conferences and workshops to do with the young adult novel. (infrequent postings) Sign up here.  
 
Red Telephone Books News about our books and our authors. Sign up here.
 
A Publisher’s Perspective Here I and some other editors blog as a publisher. Access this here.   
 
The Creative Café Project Listings and reviews of creative cafés. See them here.   
 
CaféLit Stories Find these here
 
Gill James Writer All about writing and about my books. View this here.
 
Gill’s Recommended Reads Find information here about books that have taken me out of my editor’s head and a reminder of the ones I’ve highlighted in this newsletter.    
 
Gill’s Sample Fiction Read some of my fiction here.
 
The House on Schellberg Street All about my Schellberg project. Read it here.
 
Writing Teacher All about teaching creative writing.  Some creative writing exercises. Access this here.  I also invite other writers to provide prompts and work for critique.     
 
Books Books Books Weekly offers on our books and news of new books. Find them here. 
 
The Young Person’s Library The children’s book catalogue. Access it here.
 
Fair Submissions  Find it here.
 

 


 

Friday, 10 January 2025

Today I chat to Sara Knapp about her involvement in 'Good News...?'

 


How did you hear about the Good News...?  anthology?
Probably an email from Chris Fielden or Authors Publish.
 
How did you become interested in writing short stories?
Probably because I liked reading or listening to them. But not exclusively; I read pretty eclectically anyway.
 
How did you interpret our theme?
Hm. I didn't, in so many words. Sometimes I do try to write a story specifically to a prompt but I'm not terribly good at that. Mostly, a story I seem to want to try writing happens, so I wrestle it onto pages. Then it kind of hangs around. And if I come across a call for submissions with a prompt that I think can 'be applied to' a story, I send it off.
 
Do you often enter writing competitions?
If I have a story that might suit. Although maybe I shall try to write 'to prompts' more.(All these plurals are a bit misleading: I've had five short stories published in English, and one in French on a now defunct website.
 
Do you have any advice for those who would like to write short stories?
The emails about publications calling for submissions can be very useful because they tell you about the market, and the kind of stories people will read; they are a precious resource.
 
Do you write in other genres?
I used to. Non-fiction academic articles, a couple of abandoned novels. In fact when I saw your mail's banner, I realised you are linked to - or maybe are ? -The Red Telephone, who 'almost but didn't' accepted my YA novel a bit ago!! Grrr!
 
Are you working on a project at the moment?
Not specifically. But I find there's always something simmering away somewhere, and if anything takes it into its head to pop to the surface, I'll be trying to pin it down.
 
Do you have any events planned?
No (I'm guessing possible medical intervention on a wibbly knee isn't what you mean🙂...)
 

Find your copy of Good News...? here  

Thursday, 9 January 2025

Henry Lewi talks to me about his short story collection 'Once We Were Heroes'.

 


What would you say are the themes in Once We Were Heroes? 

 

  The book is a collection of short stories I began writing after my retiral, some during the lockdown and some after. The themes are simply, have you ever wondered where do the Gods of Olympus do their shopping? Or do they do it online? Which football clubs do they support?  When Angels are sent down to Earth, how do they get home?
How did Vampires cope with Lockdown during the pandemic? What do you do if a serial killer haunting New Orleans is immortal? And finally, are Extra-Terrestrials dangerous, or do they just want to speak to us?

 

 

What got you into writing short stories in the first place? 

 

  After I retired I completed a Master’s course in History at the University of Birmingham which I really enjoyed. I attended a short story writing course and I found that the Flash Fiction/Short Story format suited my style. It's somewhat easier; you don’t have to fully develop characters, and if you add a splash of science into your story you don’t have to fully explain it, a two or three word description is enough. It’s not about being too lazy to write a novel; the short story still needs to be crafted to hold the reader’s attention, but its about being able to be concise and clear in your delivery.

 

 

 

Do you have a routine as a writer? 

 

 Not really. I just like to write in the early mornings, it seems that most of the ideas I write about just pop into my head and I tend to write them down in my notebook, but I always write the story as a one off on my computer and then spend time correcting an editing.

 

Do you have any advice for those who want to write short stories and get them published? 

 

 Find a local writing course; it helps if you understand the structure of the short story, and if you’re in a group you can bounce ideas of each other. Enjoy the writing, don’t be afraid and read your work to people. Accept the criticism; it only helps!

 

Are there any writers who influence you, who you enjoy reading? 

  

  As a kid I used to devour those yellow jacket covered Gollancz SF volumes of short stories, which is probably why I like the short story genre. In terms of writers, I love the Slow Horses series by Mick Herron, I wish I could write with his humour;; the same goes for Philip Kerr whose Bernie Gunther novels are simply brilliant and historically accurate. He’s sadly missed.  Like Herron he injects some dark humour into his novels, as does Carl Hiaasen in his Floridian novels.

 

Do you have any more writing projects or events planned? 

 

  I currently have two writing projects on the go.

 One is a series of short stories about a department of the Secret Service called the Committee of Awareness, Knowledge and Enlightenment (The Cake), which I’m combining into a book called “A Slice of Cake”.  All the stories are about 2-3000 words long, but its not really a novel just a series of linked stories that provide snapshots of the Service over an 80 year period (from 1944 to 2024). Obviously the central characters change but the overall theme is a constant.

 The second is a series of stories titled “From the Chronicles of the Celestial Office” which follows the confusion and surrounding the Big Bang and the creation of the Universe. Aamongst the tales is the discovery of the Big Red Button, which allows a re-set of the Universe, and what happens when the Universal Regulators pay an unannounced visit and Senior members of the Celestial Office go on a road trip down on Earth.    

Find Your Copy Here 

 

 

Wednesday, 8 January 2025

Sarah Swatridge tells us about her novel 'An Honourable Wager'


 

An Honourable Wager will always have a place in my heart, not only because it was my first novel, but because it was inspired by having a 10-year-old in and out of hospital, eventually diagnosed with ulcerative colitis and now, 18 years later, with Crohn’s disease. I am so proud of the way he copes. It’s one of those conditions that don’t show. He looks well, and that hides the turmoil inside, both physically and mentally.

 

An Honourable Wager was originally published as a My Weekly pocket novel which, in 2009 was rather like a small magazine. They are much improved nowadays, and are little paperbacks. Unfortunately, they only have a 2-week shelf life.

 

The following year Ulverscroft published it in Large Print and it became my first book! Some libraries still have it, but they’re tatty.

 

It was on Gill’s Blog, I think, that I came across Renascentia for out-of-print books. I re-read my first novel and decided it still had a good and relevant plot and worth submitting, with a few tweaks.

 

I’m delighted that Renascentia has given it a new lease of life. I simply love the design and believe the book-cover deserves to be entered for an award. A picture can tell a thousand words! You’ll know what I mean if you read it…and if you do, perhaps you’d consider writing me that all-important review?

 

The setting in my story is vaguely Sonning on Thames where we used to keep two goats. Cocoa and Cadbury were both male and excellent pets. We raised money for schools during Auctions of Promises – offering Goat Walking and Goat Shampooing! The goats loved all the attention.

 

I am a planner and avid list maker. I always have several projects on the go, short stories and novellas generally, but I’ve dabbled in playwriting. I always come back to my first love which is the short story.

Find you copy of the book here


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